Major sprucing up scene by adjusting my 'rules'

This original scene was planned to be the Boy and the Parents for 10 seconds but the script and the voice acting specifically said 'I hate THIS toy'. The audience gets lost if I say 'THIS' and don't specify what the focus is. In the story, the toy is important, but still, that was not obvious by the wording so I further implied it.
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