Minor story 1 working titles

 These are some title ideas for my story that I'm thinking about: 


1. The country that is 40 meters wide and a  36.6 meters height 


2. Honey, that man is pretending his house is a country


3. Don't step there it's not just a lawn it's our neighbor's country


4. I own a country on my lawn, Ha!


5. Can't believe I'm so close to the world's smallest country


6. Can't deal with the law, make your own country so why don't you


7. Why does that country change it's flag ever 12 hours?


8. Never seen a country telling me what the leader had for breakfast before


9. My neighbor own's a country, that's what's new in town


10. Oh dear, my tennis ball is trapped on my neighbor's country


11. My neighbor grew their own country, why can't I my love?


12. It only takes 10 seconds to travel countries


13. The mysterious case of my neighbor who made his property a country


14. I wonder why there's two for sale signs next to that man's country, must be awful neighbors.


15. if your house is it's own country, then do you need a visa to use your car?



I will go with the 13th one as it really describes the narrative excellently. It explains what the main character did, and it also explains how small the country is. This selection could also imply the story is told from first person from the normal neighbor.


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